L6 - Storyboard - Understanding

This is a sample of the storyboard I was given by the L6 student. Now before thinking of producing an animatic for it ( like was requested to do so for the L6 student), I need to quickly re-design so it would be suitable (using everything I have learnt about storyboarding) for the animation.

My aim is to keep everything as simple as possible, uncoloured, because my main effort and focus will be on the final animatic. So I believe it is time to redesign this storyboard. (This will help me produce an animatic that works). - Also I must not drift away from the original storyboard, I just need to modify a few things to make it suitable for the animation !

I will be using a storyboard template of my own to re-design the storyboard.